tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7868855959904598491.post2330473561366075185..comments2023-05-05T07:18:38.342-05:00Comments on Dyadic Echoes: Doubts, a PoemAndrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02115544398840204484noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7868855959904598491.post-28729128110471509062013-05-15T09:40:34.441-05:002013-05-15T09:40:34.441-05:00:D Thank you. Ditto.
And that poem is amazing. Lo...:D Thank you. Ditto.<br /><br />And that poem is amazing. Love the images it evokes. You should post it on your blog when you are done.Andrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02115544398840204484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7868855959904598491.post-3757849331668806902013-05-15T09:38:18.616-05:002013-05-15T09:38:18.616-05:00I LOVE YOU! for being you, for putting yourself ou...I LOVE YOU! for being you, for putting yourself out there, for taking the leap, and letting us know what's in your heart! For taking control of the negative and making it your bitch! :P<br /><br />This kind of inspires me, I've been reluctant to put my poetry online, but I might just post it on my blog, like you. I have the beginnings of a poem I started last week when I was in that dark place. I wonder if I can finish it, and not leave it a dark and gloomy poem. But here's what I have so far.... (it may change as I work on it!)<br /><br />As the day swells on<br />waves of thunder and pain<br />roll through my heart<br />dragging me under<br />the riptide of darkness.<br />Dreams shatter<br />Millions of pieces of hope<br />gone.<br /><br />Voices rage in my head<br />my heart<br />neither play nice<br />with the other<br />bicker and banter<br />yelling<br />screaming<br />tearing at the walls<br />punching<br />lashing<br /><br /><br /><br />Jamie Dement (LadyJai)http://writebackwards.we3dements.comnoreply@blogger.com